(1)Cicero said, “A room without a book is a body without a soul.” (2) Certainly when I enter someone’s home for the first time, I am likely to gravitate to the bookshelf, in part to glean further insight into the personality of its owner. (3) But now that the family encyclopedia is likely to have been replaced by a CD-ROM it is possible that the book might be reduced to an item of decoration rather than information and entertainment.
(4)In a sense, books have always been more than just repositories of information. (5) The look and feel of a book is as much a part of its appeal as its contents. (6) There is something immensely satisfying about opening a new book: the smell of the paper, the feel of the cover, the design on the dust jacket and the weight of the volume all contribute to the impression it makes. (7) The most aesthetically pleasing volumes, the leather bound volumes, and the volumes with beautiful bindings are actually often bought by interior decorators to add to the look of a study, office or of a living room.
(8)Books have a symbolic power. We shudder when we hear of ‘book burning’, associated down the ages with tyranny and oppression. (9) Books as cultural icons remind us of freedom of speech and enhanced opportunities, they remind us of the intellectual aspirations of the human race.
(10)But in the future will the book still be read? (11)I believe it will. (12)More books are being written and published than ever before; the book has withstood the advent of the cinema, television, and personal computer and are likely to be there in centuries to come.
Questions for Day 2:
1. What revision is most needed in sentence 9?
A. Change “enhanced” to “equal”.
B. Change the comma to a semicolon.
C. Change “us” to “people”
D. Rewrite to avoid repetition of “they remind us of”.
E. Insert “Moreover” at the beginning of the sentence.
2. Sentence 7 would probably benefit from all the following changes EXCEPT
A. Change from passive to active voice
B. Correct faulty parallelism
C. Rewrite to avoid repetition of “volumes”.
D. Delete the word “actually”.
E. Remove the word “aesthetically”.
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Is there anything wrong with saying “enhanced” here? Not really. This rules out (A). If we change “us” to “people,” then we’d have to make a lot of other changes. Throughout the article, the writer has been referring to “we” or “us.” To make this change would break that consistency. (C) is not the answer. The repetition of “they remind us of” is done for emphasis; in this case, the repetition is okay—it works well as a rhetorical device. (D) is not correct. (E) would really be an unnecessary addition. Sentence 9 is a comma splice. Remember that you cannot use a comma to separate two independent clauses (or complete sentences); you must use a semicolon—just like I did in this very sentence! The answer is B.
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Did you read the question carefully? Here we’re looking for the one choice that does not work. This is different from other questions we’ve seen so far. (A) is always good advice. Generally, the active voice is preferred over the passive voice. There is some faulty parallelism here: “. . .to add to the look of a study, office, or of a living room.” The second “of a” is unnecessary and breaks the pattern of the series. For more on parallelism in sentence structure, click here. (B) would benefit this sentence. (C) would too. It’s always a good thing to weed out any unnecessary repetitions. (D) is a good idea. “Actually” here really serves no purpose—kind of like our appendix. (E) would not benefit this sentence; in fact, to take the word “aesthetically” out would make the sentence confusing—it would not be clear in what sense the book was pleasing. The answer is E.

contains the points (0,0) and (1,2). If line m (not shown) contains the point (0,0) and is perpendicular to
where s is the number of cartridges sold, in thousands; p is the price per cartridge, in dollars; and a is a constant. If according to the projections, 100,000 cartridges are sold at $10 per cartridge, how many cartridges will be sold at $20 per cartridge?